Dying man ignored by laundrette users by Teresa

We read a news article and wrote comments using adverbs and adverbial phrases to show attitude and opinion. (UNCORRECTED)

In my opinion it is incredible that nobody called to emergency services. To be perfectly honest the owner of laundrette should have call to the ambulance when he was mumbling. Unbelievably, the customers continued washing his clothes.

 

Teresa is Spanish and joined our FCE exam preparation classes in September 2015. FCE exam preparation classes are held at Be Smart Language School in Central Milton Keynes every Tuesday and Thursday (morning and evening). Teresa worked really hard and we all cross our fingers so she will pass her exam!

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